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Mixed opinion. Lighting is okay, though proportions are off, definately. Need to study the face, and the female form more.

Breasts too big and ill-shaped. Face appears too small. More practice is needed here.

~David

1 Comment

1. Jonny (April 12th, 2011 at 2:42 am)

   Proportions are super tough to get right. I have poured so much effort over work only to realise at the end of a seven our stretch that the proportions are way off. So it happens everyone, and anyone who says different is a liar .

   Keep it up man I like this one, mistakes be damned.

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